KISS excess words goodbye

by Joanna on June 20, 2007

Keep It Simple (Stupid) – the KISS acronym – is a really useful mantra to hold onto when you’re writing.  (Not that I’m suggesting my readers are stupid, of course, just that KISS will stick in your mind.)

Scott Adams, the creator of Dilbert and enthusiastic blog writer at the Dilbert Blog, has written a really clear (and simple) introduction to the principles of good business writing.  In The Day You Became A Better Writer he highlights the value of simplicity:

The main technique is keeping things simple. Simple writing is persuasive. A good argument in five sentences will sway more people than a brilliant argument in a hundred sentences. Don’t fight it.

He also suggests that you:

  • Write a powerful first sentence
  • Use plain English words
  • Keep your sentences short
  • Use the active not passive voice
  • Strip out excess words

The last one is key to keeping it simple.

“Simple means getting rid of extra words. Don’t write, “He was very happy” when you can write “He was happy.” You think the word “very” adds something. It doesn’t. Prune your sentences.”

These principles don’t just apply to business writing.  Scott Adams is using them in his blog – and in his humour writing.  The context for your writing doesn’t matter.  What counts is the commitment to stripping out the excess words.  As long as is necessary – but not a word more.

Keep it simple.

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{ 4 comments… read them below or add one }

Emma Bird 06.21.07 at 11:50 am

This reminds me of my journalism training.

When I was doing work experience on my local paper aged 15 I was taught the following:

The sign ‘Fresh Fish Sold Here Today’ is outside a fishmongers. I had to eliminate the unnecessary words. It took me a while until I realised it was a trick question. You have to eliminate all of them.

A case in point.

Matt Hayward 03.18.09 at 11:12 am

@Emma: What a brilliant example. I love it.

@Joanna: Another nice post that seems to run with an ongoing theme back in early/mid 2007 (I’ve noticed a few other posts along the same lines). However, a very valid point that I can relate to in terms of fictional writing. Thanks for your tips, no matter how ‘behind’ I may be.

Joanna 03.19.09 at 8:13 am

Matt, this one never goes out of style, and I often use KISS as an easy way to remind people of the point.

Matt Hayward 03.19.09 at 8:44 am

Definitely, I agree. It’s something we all need to be reminded of at times. I know I like to waffle on at times. :)

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