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	<title>Comments on: KISS excess words goodbye</title>
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		<title>By: 5 Simple Ways to Power Up Your Writing &#124; Confident Writing</title>
		<link>http://confidentwriting.com/2007/06/kiss_excess_wor/#comment-19494</link>
		<dc:creator>5 Simple Ways to Power Up Your Writing &#124; Confident Writing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Oct 2009 08:11:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] KISS excess words goodbye [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Matt Hayward</title>
		<link>http://confidentwriting.com/2007/06/kiss_excess_wor/#comment-13452</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt Hayward</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Mar 2009 08:44:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Definitely, I agree. It&#039;s something we all need to be reminded of at times. I know I like to waffle on at times. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Definitely, I agree. It&#8217;s something we all need to be reminded of at times. I know I like to waffle on at times. <img src='http://confidentwriting.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Joanna</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Mar 2009 08:13:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Matt, this one never goes out of style, and I often use KISS as an easy way to remind people of the point.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Matt, this one never goes out of style, and I often use KISS as an easy way to remind people of the point.</p>
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		<title>By: Matt Hayward</title>
		<link>http://confidentwriting.com/2007/06/kiss_excess_wor/#comment-13420</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt Hayward</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Mar 2009 11:12:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Emma: What a brilliant example. I love it.

@Joanna: Another nice post that seems to run with an ongoing theme back in early/mid 2007 (I&#039;ve noticed a few other posts along the same lines). However, a &lt;strike&gt;very&lt;/strike&gt; valid point that I can relate to in terms of fictional writing. Thanks for your tips, no matter how &#039;behind&#039; I may be.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Emma: What a brilliant example. I love it.</p>
<p>@Joanna: Another nice post that seems to run with an ongoing theme back in early/mid 2007 (I&#8217;ve noticed a few other posts along the same lines). However, a <strike>very</strike> valid point that I can relate to in terms of fictional writing. Thanks for your tips, no matter how &#8216;behind&#8217; I may be.</p>
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		<title>By: Emma Bird</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emma Bird</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jun 2007 11:50:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This reminds me of my journalism training.

When I was doing work experience on my local paper aged 15 I was taught the following:

The sign &#039;Fresh Fish Sold Here Today&#039; is outside a fishmongers. I had to eliminate the unnecessary words. It took me a while until I realised it was a trick question. You have to eliminate all of them.

A case in point.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This reminds me of my journalism training.</p>
<p>When I was doing work experience on my local paper aged 15 I was taught the following:</p>
<p>The sign &#8216;Fresh Fish Sold Here Today&#8217; is outside a fishmongers. I had to eliminate the unnecessary words. It took me a while until I realised it was a trick question. You have to eliminate all of them.</p>
<p>A case in point.</p>
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