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		<title>By: Blogging Freedom Is a Mixed Blessing: Guest Post by Brad Shorr &#124; Confident Writing</title>
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		<dc:creator>Blogging Freedom Is a Mixed Blessing: Guest Post by Brad Shorr &#124; Confident Writing</dc:creator>
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		<title>By: Leap Before You Write That Letter Of Apology – Guest Post By Brad Shorr &#124; Confident Writing</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leap Before You Write That Letter Of Apology – Guest Post By Brad Shorr &#124; Confident Writing</dc:creator>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Mar 2008 20:29:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ranjith, thanks for stopping by and sharing these perspectives with us.

One thing that puzzles me is that business people are very aware of their time as readers - but tend to forget the importance of readability, speed etc when they are writing.  An investment of time and effort on their part will save other people a lot of time and energy.  If they&#039;d just put their reader&#039;s hat on when they were writing surely we could transform business writing?

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ranjith, thanks for stopping by and sharing these perspectives with us.</p>
<p>One thing that puzzles me is that business people are very aware of their time as readers &#8211; but tend to forget the importance of readability, speed etc when they are writing.  An investment of time and effort on their part will save other people a lot of time and energy.  If they&#8217;d just put their reader&#8217;s hat on when they were writing surely we could transform business writing?</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Ranjith</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Mar 2008 12:54:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Business writing, it is shorter and more concise than many other types of writing. Business is busy - Your letter, a memo or a report can only thirty second reading (if it), with no time for brooding or unburdened. They would better adapt to the point quickly, support your arguments, and quickly ended.

Business is often written as an inverted pyramid, too. They begin and end with a large foyer close - to configure a home draw the attention of your readers, if you wish - convincing your reader or on facts, arguments, decision, etc.

There are a few subtleties, business writing, however. If bad news to provide, for example, that you are not directly in the long jump, but work to your message with diplomacy and tact. In addition, there is no time to waste, the drive for more obscure by paternalistic.

Finally, the business has been accepted in writing certain formats, such as, for example, to organize notes, reports and letters. In addition, some companies generally accepted practices in writing: written, concise, with balls and securities, short sentences occupied, the creation of short paragraphs and more quickly on the point.

In short, the economy must be in writing kind readers. If this is not the case, your efforts to communication fail. I wish you much happiness in your travel writing - perhaps in the links below offer several help.


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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Business writing, it is shorter and more concise than many other types of writing. Business is busy &#8211; Your letter, a memo or a report can only thirty second reading (if it), with no time for brooding or unburdened. They would better adapt to the point quickly, support your arguments, and quickly ended.</p>
<p>Business is often written as an inverted pyramid, too. They begin and end with a large foyer close &#8211; to configure a home draw the attention of your readers, if you wish &#8211; convincing your reader or on facts, arguments, decision, etc.</p>
<p>There are a few subtleties, business writing, however. If bad news to provide, for example, that you are not directly in the long jump, but work to your message with diplomacy and tact. In addition, there is no time to waste, the drive for more obscure by paternalistic.</p>
<p>Finally, the business has been accepted in writing certain formats, such as, for example, to organize notes, reports and letters. In addition, some companies generally accepted practices in writing: written, concise, with balls and securities, short sentences occupied, the creation of short paragraphs and more quickly on the point.</p>
<p>In short, the economy must be in writing kind readers. If this is not the case, your efforts to communication fail. I wish you much happiness in your travel writing &#8211; perhaps in the links below offer several help.</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Oct 2007 07:10:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Emma - thank you.  And for the reassurance about the ciccia!

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Emma &#8211; thank you.  And for the reassurance about the ciccia!</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Emma Bird</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emma Bird</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Oct 2007 18:41:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brad - I was a journalist. Trying to make sense of other people&#039;s sentences and phrasing is what I spent lots of my time doing.

Joanna - it&#039;s thanks to the environment you&#039;ve created that allows us to critique each other. As for the fat, there&#039;s no need to be paranoid unless you want to go shopping.

Emma
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brad &#8211; I was a journalist. Trying to make sense of other people&#8217;s sentences and phrasing is what I spent lots of my time doing.</p>
<p>Joanna &#8211; it&#8217;s thanks to the environment you&#8217;ve created that allows us to critique each other. As for the fat, there&#8217;s no need to be paranoid unless you want to go shopping.</p>
<p>Emma</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Oct 2007 15:47:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Emma, Robert and Brad

I just have to say how much I love having readers who are willing to critique and compliment each other&#039;s writing techniques!

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Emma, Robert and Brad</p>
<p>I just have to say how much I love having readers who are willing to critique and compliment each other&#8217;s writing techniques!</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Brad Shorr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brad Shorr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Oct 2007 13:33:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Emma, reading out loud is definitely a reliable technique - thanks for pointing it out. And I didn&#039;t realize tape was this funny!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Emma, reading out loud is definitely a reliable technique &#8211; thanks for pointing it out. And I didn&#8217;t realize tape was this funny!</p>
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		<title>By: Emma Bird</title>
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		<dc:creator>Emma Bird</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Oct 2007 10:33:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Brad

Good list.

I like point 7. I think it&#039;s fair to say that you can be your own sounding board, too, if no one else is around. By reading the piece out load you can see where it jars, where the rhythm doesn&#039;t flow and where it doesn&#039;t make sense.

The duct tape also got me smiling.

Thanks
Emma
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Brad</p>
<p>Good list.</p>
<p>I like point 7. I think it&#8217;s fair to say that you can be your own sounding board, too, if no one else is around. By reading the piece out load you can see where it jars, where the rhythm doesn&#8217;t flow and where it doesn&#8217;t make sense.</p>
<p>The duct tape also got me smiling.</p>
<p>Thanks<br />
Emma</p>
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		<title>By: Brad Shorr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brad Shorr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Oct 2007 13:58:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Robert, I agree number one is tough, but a mentor once told me, &quot;Unlike wine, business problems don&#039;t improve with age.&quot; If you&#039;re going to get &quot;killed&quot;, might as well get it over with!



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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Robert, I agree number one is tough, but a mentor once told me, &#8220;Unlike wine, business problems don&#8217;t improve with age.&#8221; If you&#8217;re going to get &#8220;killed&#8221;, might as well get it over with!</p>
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