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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Jan 2008 21:08:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lillie, that&#039;s such an apt story :-)

Proving the point of both cutting... and storing for that perfect moment.

Joanna


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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lillie, that&#8217;s such an apt story <img src='http://confidentwriting.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Proving the point of both cutting&#8230; and storing for that perfect moment.</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Jan 2008 21:06:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Amy, that&#039;s a great learning point:

&quot;I begin to realise that it was that process of writing down my ideas that led me to develop more sophisticated ideas in later chapters&quot;

But I can appreciate it&#039;s kind of hard to swallow as you go along!

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Amy, that&#8217;s a great learning point:</p>
<p>&#8220;I begin to realise that it was that process of writing down my ideas that led me to develop more sophisticated ideas in later chapters&#8221;</p>
<p>But I can appreciate it&#8217;s kind of hard to swallow as you go along!</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Lillie Ammann</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lillie Ammann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Jan 2008 20:34:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes we need to let go of our words - especially those we think are golden. :-)

However, storing them can have positive results. When I was trying to sell my first novel, I followed the advice of a number of people (agent, editors, and other writers) who told me to eliminate the prologue, which described the heroine&#039;s stroke. The story was a romance that included her overcoming the challenges caused by the stroke.

When I finally found a publisher, the first revision she wanted was a prologue describing the stroke. I pulled out the original prologue that I had deleted from the manuscript and impressed the editor with the speed of my revision.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes we need to let go of our words &#8211; especially those we think are golden. <img src='http://confidentwriting.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>However, storing them can have positive results. When I was trying to sell my first novel, I followed the advice of a number of people (agent, editors, and other writers) who told me to eliminate the prologue, which described the heroine&#8217;s stroke. The story was a romance that included her overcoming the challenges caused by the stroke.</p>
<p>When I finally found a publisher, the first revision she wanted was a prologue describing the stroke. I pulled out the original prologue that I had deleted from the manuscript and impressed the editor with the speed of my revision.</p>
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		<title>By: amypalko</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Jan 2008 16:29:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, I so enjoyed listening to your podcast, Joanna.  That was lovely!
Writing my phd thesis, I have had to come face to face with the issue of having to leave words behind.  Sometimes I have submitted a chapter that I had taken time and effort over, only to have my supervisor tell me (in the nicest possible way, of course) that I need to go back to the drawing board.  It&#039;s demoralising at first, but then, as time goes by, I begin to realise that it was that process of writing down my ideas that led me to develop more sophisticated ideas in later chapters.  It&#039;s only really at that point that I come to terms with having to cut out those words, and be grateful for the benefits they gave me.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, I so enjoyed listening to your podcast, Joanna.  That was lovely!<br />
Writing my phd thesis, I have had to come face to face with the issue of having to leave words behind.  Sometimes I have submitted a chapter that I had taken time and effort over, only to have my supervisor tell me (in the nicest possible way, of course) that I need to go back to the drawing board.  It&#8217;s demoralising at first, but then, as time goes by, I begin to realise that it was that process of writing down my ideas that led me to develop more sophisticated ideas in later chapters.  It&#8217;s only really at that point that I come to terms with having to cut out those words, and be grateful for the benefits they gave me.</p>
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