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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 22:01:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sadly Rachel I have no poems I can share with you.  Maybe one day :-)

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sadly Rachel I have no poems I can share with you.  Maybe one day <img src='http://confidentwriting.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Rachel Fox</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rachel Fox</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 14:33:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have a poem on that very subject (retaining mystery that is, not bad things...though I have lots of those too).
How about you?
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have a poem on that very subject (retaining mystery that is, not bad things&#8230;though I have lots of those too).<br />
How about you?</p>
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		<title>By: Jim Murdoch</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jim Murdoch</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 13:01:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Joanna, yes, the Balzac quote is a good one. I know we use metaphors like &#039;hammering&#039; the text into submission and I suppose that works fine when it comes to an outline but then we need to pull back. Having power and using power are too different things. There used to be a comic book character called, if memory serves me, Karnak. Karnak has the ability to find the weak point in any person, plan or object so it only ever took one blow placed in the right place whereas a character like the Hulk would attack with fist flailing.

Ken, good point. I don&#039;t know much about chemistry but I know about maths. A small number like 2 is given power by its placement. Turn it into a superscript and stick it to the right of a number and it increases its power by that factor. It&#039;s the same with words. I&#039;ll sometimes include a tiny sentence and let it be a whole paragraph focusing attention on it and magnifying its importance. In fact a word could be a whole paragraph.

Rachel, &#039;magic&#039; has lost its edge in this modern world, it has become far more secular in its definition. The same could be said about a word like &#039;surreal&#039; which most people use instead of &#039;unreal&#039; these days. Magical things seem inexplicable. They&#039;re not but that&#039;s not the point. The point is that we don&#039;t want them explained. We&#039;re happy to leave a bit of the mystery there. That&#039;s not a bad thing.

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Joanna, yes, the Balzac quote is a good one. I know we use metaphors like &#8216;hammering&#8217; the text into submission and I suppose that works fine when it comes to an outline but then we need to pull back. Having power and using power are too different things. There used to be a comic book character called, if memory serves me, Karnak. Karnak has the ability to find the weak point in any person, plan or object so it only ever took one blow placed in the right place whereas a character like the Hulk would attack with fist flailing.</p>
<p>Ken, good point. I don&#8217;t know much about chemistry but I know about maths. A small number like 2 is given power by its placement. Turn it into a superscript and stick it to the right of a number and it increases its power by that factor. It&#8217;s the same with words. I&#8217;ll sometimes include a tiny sentence and let it be a whole paragraph focusing attention on it and magnifying its importance. In fact a word could be a whole paragraph.</p>
<p>Rachel, &#8216;magic&#8217; has lost its edge in this modern world, it has become far more secular in its definition. The same could be said about a word like &#8216;surreal&#8217; which most people use instead of &#8216;unreal&#8217; these days. Magical things seem inexplicable. They&#8217;re not but that&#8217;s not the point. The point is that we don&#8217;t want them explained. We&#8217;re happy to leave a bit of the mystery there. That&#8217;s not a bad thing.</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 09:44:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello Rachel

It&#039;s good to meet you

I think the element of &#039;magic&#039; for me comes when you write from the source - whether that&#039;s some place deep inside you, or a place that gives you that sense of connection, or a piece of music - it&#039;s you drawing from your own well. If that makes any sense at all!

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Rachel</p>
<p>It&#8217;s good to meet you</p>
<p>I think the element of &#8216;magic&#8217; for me comes when you write from the source &#8211; whether that&#8217;s some place deep inside you, or a place that gives you that sense of connection, or a piece of music &#8211; it&#8217;s you drawing from your own well. If that makes any sense at all!</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Rachel Fox</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rachel Fox</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Apr 2008 08:48:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not usually one for throwing about words like &#039;magic&#039; but I&#039;d have to say that for me good writing has to be science and magic, not one or the other. Somehow they mix together - in a way both scientific and magical. Otherwise it&#039;s either too flat or too fluffy...for me, anyway.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not usually one for throwing about words like &#8216;magic&#8217; but I&#8217;d have to say that for me good writing has to be science and magic, not one or the other. Somehow they mix together &#8211; in a way both scientific and magical. Otherwise it&#8217;s either too flat or too fluffy&#8230;for me, anyway.</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Apr 2008 22:27:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ken, it&#039;s good to hear from you and thanks for stopping by.

9 times out of 10 I&#039;d say that less letters = more energy.

Maybe the work we do to cut them down, to shape them, to keep them simple, to get them to ring true is what gives them the power?

(But physics was never my strong suit...)

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ken, it&#8217;s good to hear from you and thanks for stopping by.</p>
<p>9 times out of 10 I&#8217;d say that less letters = more energy.</p>
<p>Maybe the work we do to cut them down, to shape them, to keep them simple, to get them to ring true is what gives them the power?</p>
<p>(But physics was never my strong suit&#8230;)</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Ken</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Apr 2008 21:43:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Law of Conservation of Energy also tells us that Energy cannot be created.  So if we write some words, and they have energy, that energy has come from us.

Hmmm... I wonder if all words carry the same energy?  The more letters the more energy, perhaps?  I don&#039;t think so.  I think the word &#039;maybe&#039; can have considerably less energy that, say, the word, &#039;no&#039; depending on how it is written.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Law of Conservation of Energy also tells us that Energy cannot be created.  So if we write some words, and they have energy, that energy has come from us.</p>
<p>Hmmm&#8230; I wonder if all words carry the same energy?  The more letters the more energy, perhaps?  I don&#8217;t think so.  I think the word &#8216;maybe&#8217; can have considerably less energy that, say, the word, &#8216;no&#8217; depending on how it is written.</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Young</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Young</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Apr 2008 10:23:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jim, thanks again for kicking things off with your thoughts on the nature of power and how that applies to writing.

I think that words have/are energy too and there are so many times you can see the sparks flying in their wake (in a good way) from the connection with the person who reads them.

I particularly liked the Balzac quote you included

&quot;Power is not revealed by striking hard or often, but by striking true.&quot;

It&#039;s what I&#039;d aim for in my own writing.

Thanks again

Joanna
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jim, thanks again for kicking things off with your thoughts on the nature of power and how that applies to writing.</p>
<p>I think that words have/are energy too and there are so many times you can see the sparks flying in their wake (in a good way) from the connection with the person who reads them.</p>
<p>I particularly liked the Balzac quote you included</p>
<p>&#8220;Power is not revealed by striking hard or often, but by striking true.&#8221;</p>
<p>It&#8217;s what I&#8217;d aim for in my own writing.</p>
<p>Thanks again</p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: amypalko</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Apr 2008 10:02:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Such a great post, Jim.  Our thoughts on the power of words are very similar, but the scientific approach you take here is so different from the way I usually think of things.  I&#039;m going to enjoy rereading this!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Such a great post, Jim.  Our thoughts on the power of words are very similar, but the scientific approach you take here is so different from the way I usually think of things.  I&#8217;m going to enjoy rereading this!</p>
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